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Thursday, 16 August 2012

Mother.....My first love




She has given up on life
The day she chose to be a wife

Trying to adjust to the leaders rule,
Getting blamed, after working like a mule,

Waking up first and going to bed last,
On the smallest of mistakes; there is a blast,

Nine months of pain still makes her happy,
She gave up on career; to change our nappy,

Your happiness is hers; Ur her only goal,
She will drink your sorrows; served in a bowl,

There is utmost joy; when she feeds us the meals,
Make food someday; you will know how it feels,

Just remember the last time; on her forehead you kissed,
Though when she cares and calls; it makes you pissed,

If the expected things is not according to your taste,
The efforts that she has put is considered to be waste,

In the temple she prays for you; walking a mile,
You can’t even drop her; saying NO with a smile,

You feel she is old and will never understand you,
She was the one, who understood, when words were few,



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27 comments:

  1. touching and soul-stirring ,just love it.

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  2. The last two lines touched !
    after reading dis, I LOVE MY MOM

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  3. Superb Words For the Most Important Person In Our Lives
    ~~~~~MOTHER~~~~~~

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  4. Nice post...

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  5. It described beautifully. .:-)
    *sakshi*

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  6. Really Great.....Combination of emotions and experience......such type of poetry is essential to tell the world about depth of relations and emotions......:-) Keep it up......Simply wonderful!!!

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  7. Great one very heart rendering.....missing my mother...

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  8. Superbly Blended Words
    Keep It Up

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  9. truely said... its heart touching... no one can b as grt as mom... super duper lyk...:-):-)

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  10. Omg wow!! No words ash... Truly heartwarming and an eye-opener to how special our mothers are :) <3

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  11. Omg wow!! No words ash... Truly heartwarming and an eye-opener to how special our mothers are :) <3

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  13. Wow.. and where is de picture/painting from?

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  14. No forces of the world can be compared to a love of a mother.You have done a good job by putting it beautifully AD.

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